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07 February 2011

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greg

the line "a noisy abdication,
doused with blood and snot"
did indeed jump out at me immediately as a 'quotable'.

It's got 'punch'.

It does feel discordant at the end of that reflection though -- a reflection which stands well on it's own.

What the hell -- the discord provides punch for both.
Let is be.

Many thanks for letting us peer 'between the sheets'

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